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The Overnighter - Part 1

"A POV fantasy written by a couple"

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Author's Notes

"This is a joint story written by us as a couple. We've each written a section in POV style which plays out a joint fantasy. <p> [ADVERT] </p>We hope you enjoy reading it as much as we've enjoyed writing it together... Part 2 will come soon, we promise!"

Her:
I have been looking forward - (ok let's be very honest, aching ) - to seeing him all day. 

Now walking into the bar to meet Adrian, I can't help but wonder what mischief he has thought up!

There is always something - a sexy dare, public teasing - which he knows drives me crazy, or maybe a soft sweet seduction is planned! You see one of the things I find so fucking wonderful about my lover is that I never know just what he will do next to bring out the wickedly wanton side of me. Which he knows belongs to him and him alone.

As I walk into the hotel bar it seems a little quiet tonight.  A couple just leaving and a guy sitting in the corner alone reading his newspaper. He looks up as I pass and I smile briefly acknowledging his glance, before turning to look for the man I really want to see. 

He looks up and I can see instantly he approves of the dress I have chosen which clings to my curves. A fine jersey wrap dress with a thin tie belt at the waist, which literally holds this dress together. Possibly a risky choice with my Mr Mischief. The outfit was finished with the highest heels.

He's sat on a bar stool looking so, so good and I walk straight to him to stand between his open thighs. I slide my hands up his arms and over his shoulders to smooth over the back of his neck pulling his mouth down to mine. I'm hungry, so damn hungry!!

The moment our mouths meet, his hands are on me, sliding slowly down my back then squeezing my bottom. I moan softly as we kiss, which then turns to a giggle as I feel his hands pull the skirt of my dress higher.

'Ade, Noooo!' I take a swat at his wandering hands with mine but, if nothing else, my man is persistent.

'Shhh, babe,' he murmurs next to my lips and I shiver. He slowly kisses along my jawline and whispers in my ear, 'baby don't look now but I think you have an admirer,' as he whispers he continues to slowly ease the hem of my dress higher.


Him:
Katie always looks so stunning when we meet like this. She loves to dress up and enjoys the adoring looks she gets from others around us. This evening I could tell her mood from the classy, but extremely sexy outfit she had selected to wear.
I watch as Katie walks in and works out where I am.

The bar is fairly empty, but she instantly drew the attention of a guy in the corner who undressed her with his stare as her perfect ass wiggled it's way across the bar towards me. I wonder if he could tell that she was wearing very little under that wrap-around dress?

I love the way she greets me - her scent, smile,  her naughty sparkling eyes. The feel of her pressing against me, radiating her eagerness to be close, the taste of her lipstick.

Watching the guy opposite as I lift her skirt, exposing her long stocking clad legs to him. I enjoy his stare as I show her off. We kiss and our hands run over each other in a way that some may feel inappropriate for a public place. I love the thrill of people watching us, with their mixed views on whether it's right or wrong. Katie's giggle tell me she loves it too!

We get her a drink and she sits on the empty stool next to me. Her dress falling open as she struggles to perch on the high stool. We're close, her crossed legs between mine, giving me room to run my hand up and down her thigh as we talk and laugh. Our lips meet many times as we talk, sometimes stopping between chat and drinks to kiss.

I notice the guy opposite has put down his newspaper. He's sitting back in his seat just watching Katie, almost transfixed by her. I've already warned her that she has an admirer, to which she giggled. But now I whisper in her ear that she seems to have a very attentive admirer who perhaps she should say hi to.

My mind is now racing, my heart beating with a new excitement as her eyes fill with that naughty sparkle...

Her:
I feel a familiar buzz of excitement, a challenge he is so damn good at setting challenges!! He knows I'm competitive, stubborn some might say, I won't back down from a challenge.

I take a sip of my drink looking into his beautiful blue eyes, they are bright with the thought of just how far I might take this.

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I tilt my head, a smile plays on my lips, "okay Adrian I accept - Game On!"

I stand, smoothing my dress down, collecting myself. With a final glance at my lover, I wink cheekily. I pick up my drink and walk slowly over to the corner of the bar where my unsuspecting 'victim' sits alone.

'Excuse me,' I speak quietly as though already we share an unspoken intimacy. 'Would you mind if I join you for a moment? I hate sitting alone in a bar,' looking around me as if there is no one else in the bar except us. He lifts his gaze to me looking somewhat surprised and I notice immediately his welcoming, deep brown eyes.

He smiles, 'you are welcome to, but you didn't seem to be alone a few moments ago,' he says good-naturedly, his gaze pointedly looking over at my annoyingly smug looking lover sitting at the bar. 

I smile placing my glass on the table and sitting down next to him on the window seat, crossing my legs ensuring the dress fall way leaving a good amount of thigh revealed.

'Ahh, you mean Adrian? Well, he is an option for company yes, but... well... then I noticed you seemed to be here alone and more than a little interested in me when I walked in soo - ta-dah - here I am!'

I smile cheekily, my eyes meet his (which I notice have dipped to my stockinged thigh momentarily but then quickly recover to meet mine again). 'My name is Katie,' I hold my hand out to him, my smile daring him not to want to know more about me.

He takes hold of my hand, his own large hand engulfs mine.

'Hello Katie, my name is David,' his voice is deep and warm.

'It's nice to meet you, David. What brings you to our sleepy little town?' I forget instantly a certain someone over at the bar and centre my whole attention on the surprisingly sexy David.

He looks directly into my eyes when he replies 'just a little business, an overnighter.' 

'Oohh, now that sounds like it could be fun!' I lift an eyebrow, eyes twinkling. Raising my glass, I say, 'here's to overnighters, David.' He laughs softly and his glass meets mine! 

Ohhh, yes, Adrian ... Game On!

Him:
I suggested that she says hi to him, but I know from the wicked sparkle in her eye that she is thinking of more.

Katie consistently surprises me at how she's able to push the boundaries beyond what even I imagine. I love her for it though. She's wild and exciting - we're a perfect match, so it seems.

I watch her approach him, her ass displaying for me the same perfect wiggle that it had given our new stranger friend, minutes before when she entered the bar. I'm transfixed by the ease with which she approaches him and engages him in conversation. I desperately try to make out what they're saying, but can only imagine the teasing exchange of comments and eye contact they're having.

As usual, the excitement I feel far outweighs any pangs of jealousy, and I'm soon sitting back watching in wonder as the two of them flirt together. Thoughts race through my head. Fantasising about her sitting close to him, pressing against him.

He's an attractive guy and I know she'll be slowly getting moist as he flirts back at her. I wonder how far she'll take this. We've played around at flirting in front of one another before, with the occasional grope to push the boundaries a little. The sex we've had afterwards has been so intense, both of us enjoying fantasising about how things could have gone further as we fuck.

Tonight she seems different, brash perhaps, but as sexy as I've ever seen her!

Her:
David asks me if I want another drink, 'yes, why not!' I agree, fixing him with a dazzling smile.

As he walks to the bar, I quickly look over to where Adrian is sitting. He smiles cheekily and lifts his drink to me. I can see he is fascinated and excited by this.

Oh, he has no idea just how far I will take this tonight!

I lift the little I have left of my drink - cheers!


To Be Continued.

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